tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889425249857065612.post4750928520016464892..comments2023-11-03T22:51:19.739+13:00Comments on Moli : The Scary Rusty shedGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09030080730452544769noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889425249857065612.post-6593864948471348132012-11-01T12:28:41.225+13:002012-11-01T12:28:41.225+13:00Kia ora
This a really interesting story.The monst...Kia ora<br /><br />This a really interesting story.The monster picture is cool.The start of the story is cool.Alexander Lennozhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00973668644399454761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889425249857065612.post-16435036730298073952012-11-01T12:06:54.070+13:002012-11-01T12:06:54.070+13:00Kia ora Moli
this is a really interesting I wond...Kia ora Moli <br /><br />this is a really interesting I wonder what will <br />happen next I really want to read the end of <br />your story tell me how long did it take you to<br />finish your blog post.Tamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12265147481627079179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889425249857065612.post-29502391739263521032012-10-31T21:41:42.795+13:002012-10-31T21:41:42.795+13:00Moli you are well on the way to becoming a success...Moli you are well on the way to becoming a successful writer of scary stories. I can close my eyes and draw a picture of your green goblin. You have also included onomatopoeia to describe the door. Good choice of adjectives that have hooked me in as a reader. Ka pai!!!Ms Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00394200109410875698noreply@blogger.com