Friday, 26 October 2012

Story Operner

LI: To write exciting story openers
SC:It must include adjectives, speech, figurative language (similies, metaphors, personification, onomatopoeia and alliteration).

Use each idea listed to write your own story opener:

* Loud thumping noise late at night ‘what could that be ?’ I whispered to my little brother Jake. Suddenly I felt goosebumps all over my arms. It was as loud as a foghorn. My feet froze and my knees wobbled like jelly............

I am looking forward to writing this scary story.

1 comment:

Ms George said...

Wow! This opener has certainly covered your learning intention successfully. An excellent description of your feelings with reference to senses. I am looking forward to the next part of your story.

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