The Scary Rusty shed

LT:To write a story opener to hook in the reader.

THERE WAS AN OLD SHED AT THE BACK OF OUR FLOWER GARDEN. MY BROTHER KNEW THAT A GOBLIN LIVED IN IT. A SMALL CROOKED GREEN BODY THAT ATTACKED PEOPLE IF THEY GO IN THE SHED. THE NEXT DAY  ME AND JAKE MY FRIEND AND MY DAD MICHAEL TOOK A LOOK. SQUEEK! SQUEEK! WENT THE RUSTY TIN DOOR. WE WENT WITH A TORCH AND A BASEBALL BAT.  WE TIP TOED IN AND WE WENT AND LOOKED FOR THE CREATURE. SUDDENLY MY DAD TURNED HIS HEAD AND THERE WAS THE GOBLIN STARING RIGHT AT HIM.  HIS TWO RED EYES WERE AS RED AS BLOOD. HE HAD YELLOW SLIME DRIPPING ALL OVER HIM.  THE GOBLIN WAS AS SMALL AS A CHILD ... TO BE CONTINUED.

Story Operner

LI: To write exciting story openers
SC:It must include adjectives, speech, figurative language (similies, metaphors, personification, onomatopoeia and alliteration).

Use each idea listed to write your own story opener:

* Loud thumping noise late at night ‘what could that be ?’ I whispered to my little brother Jake. Suddenly I felt goosebumps all over my arms. It was as loud as a foghorn. My feet froze and my knees wobbled like jelly............
I am looking forward to writing this scary story.

Nightmare On Elstree Ave

It was a dark and dismal night, two huge red eyes shone out of black hoodie.They looked like glowing coals in the darkness. It sent shivers down my spine, my knees felt wobbly and I could not move.
Jason has a hockey mask so I thought this must be Freddy. I turned around and started to run away but he was too fast, every time I tried to get away he was there to cut me off. He was playing a game of cat and mouse with me and as hard as I tried I just couldn’t escape from Freddy. It didn’t take long for him to get bored of playing his game with me and he had me cornered with nowhere to run.
As Freddy was getting ready to kill me with his big, sharp claws Jason appeared out of the darkness to challenge Freddy for the right to kill me. As they were fighting each other I saw this as my opportunity to get away. I ran all the way home and called the police. They sent the armed offenders out to find Freddy and Jason. The armed offenders captured them and took them both to an underground bunker prison cell in the outskirts of New York City.